Work on your mixing better
try to turn all your melodies down and have your drums higher than the melodies if that makes sense
The bass is over powering the song way too much

Turn down the bass and have the kick overpower the bass then had a sidechain effect so the kick has more room to breathe.

Could use better hit hats and maybe a few drops and cuts. .
maybe a fade in and out
a different kick in my opinion the kick is made for techno